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I never knew you
I never knew you
01/12/09 at 11:41 AM by Undue Noise
I normally write better than this. That's all I've got to say for myself - bitterness + boredom during philosophy lesson = this

The words I say to make things right.
Always spoken from the wrong mouth.
I sharpen the syllables to soften the blow.
The narrative runs dry when you don't respond.
It took you so long to find yourself.
I wonder if the waiting was worth it.
The only emotions you capture still on a camera.
Frozen and false for the seconds it takes to pose.
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12:28 PM on 01/12/09
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Dude, Liv, this is amazing.
Very nice job =]
12:38 PM on 01/12/09
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Originally Posted by alltimehoe93
Dude, Liv, this is amazing.
Very nice job =]
I think you're being too generous with that praise Tash but thanks anyway haha. One of my close friends recently revealed themselves to be a backstabber and I just had to get something out. A lot of it doesn't make sense =[
12:43 AM on 01/15/09
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Liv!
This is amazing. I would dearly love to see the things you write that you think are better than this because believe me, this is so good.

I'm sorry that the inspiration for this was so negative, but you succeeded in writing something that I think is really quite beautiful. I love this, and I mean that.
11:24 AM on 01/15/09
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Originally Posted by Fightstar16
Liv!
This is amazing. I would dearly love to see the things you write that you think are better than this because believe me, this is so good.

I'm sorry that the inspiration for this was so negative, but you succeeded in writing something that I think is really quite beautiful. I love this, and I mean that.
Thank you so much, your praise means a lot to me. This isn't so much as bad - just unorganised and not very coherent. I'm going to try and start writing more linear poems/stories soon though.
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