Nicky ( SomedayTheFire) and I made a deal that if he posted 1 poem, I would post three...
here is his beautiful poem :D
http://www.absolutepunk.net/journal.php?do=showjournal&j=9712#e 109052
And here are my three for ya! Upon Nicky's request!
And I haven't finished this one yet...
I like that you say we instead of you and I
I like that you’ve taught me to hold my head up high
You make me giggle in ten different ways
And I really do love all of our days
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and the second. . . . and third haha
They are reallly good!
oh and the fourth one!
they're all really great!
You say: Still awkward.
I say: I know you are, but what am I? And yes I'm taking it there!
Besides, I'm not claiming to be the best writer.. I'm just writing whatever I want. And I'd rather it be awkward than be boring. Again, thanks for you opinion.