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Moving Andrew
Moving Andrew
04/23/09 at 08:18 AM by AbsoluteINK
Moving Andrew
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Courtney Jones



There are three things left in the room. A Gibson guitar, a sleeping bag, and the erroneous impression that I loved him. The first two things will stay with me. I'll pawn the guitar but keep the sleeping bag. Mine is getting old. The latter, I imagine, will stay with him forever.

I pull the vacuum from outside the door, a Hoover that I brought from home. It sucks up all the trouble that we made. It picks up wrappers bottle caps and ashes. It cleans up very well. He's...[read more]
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08:19 AM on 04/23/09
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this is sticky separation.

-AINK
12:50 PM on 04/23/09
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Wow, that was awesome.
I loved this part Once things go missing, they tend to bring on more meaning than they ever had when they were around. This goes the same with objects, pets, houses, people. There seems a need for closure, a better definition for mental clarity. It's why average people become martyrs in death. Why a lost ring becomes the greatest piece of jewelry ever owned.

Nice work!
03:20 PM on 04/23/09
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Very good.
04:06 PM on 04/23/09
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beautiful style of prose
01:41 PM on 03/19/11
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Oh wow....the mundane things do take on a whole new light when they are lost or given up...I really like this...it is so strange that the warm, comfortable feelings that are there in the beginning start to dissipate and then become nothing at all....sad really that there is so little left when the relationship felt so very large to the people in it...or person in it as we know that the individuals in the relationship can have two totally different viewpoints on the same relationship...didn't mean to write that much...hope it makes sense...just really wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading that and it touched a chord in me as good writing SHOULD...Thank You for that....
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