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I made a deal; I'm going to keep it.
I made a deal; I'm going to keep it.
12/19/08 at 05:16 PM by Brooklyn2010
Nicky ( SomedayTheFire) and I made a deal that if he posted 1 poem, I would post three...
here is his beautiful poem :D
http://www.absolutepunk.net/journal.php?do=showjournal&j=9712#e 109052
And here are my three for ya! Upon Nicky's request!

And I haven't finished this one yet...
I like that you say we instead of you and I
I like that youíve taught me to hold my head up high
You make me giggle in ten different ways
And I really do love all of our days
Iím smiling at the sight of your words...


You always bring it back to that
Never completely explaining yourself
I say itís just not something I excel at
And you say itís something I need to work at
One day you call it adorable;
That shyness I canít quite defeat
Then the next day, itís just horrible
You make me feel so incomplete
So when I canít overcome it, you get irate
And when you look at me like that;
I melt, I sink, I disintegrate.
Either way, I donít need that
Not from you, my supposed soul mate


I canít escape the loneliness you bring
I canít avoid the songs you used to sing
I canít blame you for everything;
After all, youíre just another human being,
But why is it when I hear you sing,
My heart disintegrates, and Iíve nothing left to bring?


You say you want to get away
I laugh and say youíre crazy
One thing I hope you get in your head
Is that I wanna be youíre baby.

Thanks to Nickels for posting his poem and for making me post mine....
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