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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/17/11, 04:59 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 690
Posted By 020jeffs
This took me about 30 mins to write and I wasn't...

This took me about 30 mins to write and I wasn't drunk or high. I was on the bus on my way home.
I think if you heard it being rapped you would not find anger in the tone but would more see a funnier...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/16/11, 11:29 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 690
Posted By 020jeffs
Three other forums love this piece. I'll be interested to see how you troll it.

You don't have to guess who's back, I never left!
I always been whispering lyrics under my breath,
And I always had some sh*t I need to get off my chest.
That's why I spit until my mouth is dry and...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/14/11, 05:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 434
Posted By 020jeffs
Wow.. such a credible and professional...

Wow.. such a credible and professional response?
Well done.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/14/11, 04:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 434
Posted By 020jeffs
Let me put THIS as lightly as possible. Your...

Let me put THIS as lightly as possible.
Your English is terrible.
I don't think you know what the word 'Cliche' means.
I don't think you understand the concept of repetition to reinforce a point.
I...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/14/11, 02:38 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 434
Posted By 020jeffs
I have never felt so strongly about anything I have ever wrote.

You took a plain piece of paper, took a slate that was clean.
You took the f*cking piss and you f*cked with his dreams.
And when you ran from the tears and you ran from the screams.
You bred a...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/14/11, 10:19 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 702
Posted By 020jeffs
You are so fucking stupid. Don't comment on...

You are so fucking stupid.
Don't comment on things you don't understand.
There is NO bragging is 2nd verse.. in fact I put myself down.

If you don't know the background to the rap, the reason it...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/23/11, 09:11 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 698
Posted By 020jeffs
This topic suits my style perfectly. You are...

This topic suits my style perfectly. You are aware that I'm not actually talking about a girl right?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/23/11, 08:46 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 698
Posted By 020jeffs
Is there any particular reason that you have...

Is there any particular reason that you have quoted that line?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/23/11, 08:45 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 698
Posted By 020jeffs
Hey do you mind explaining that line to me?

Hey do you mind explaining that line to me?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/22/11, 11:04 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 698
Posted By 020jeffs
The things you make me do.

I wish it was possible for me to do,
The impossible thing and just talk to you.
Cos there's a couple things that I need to say.
But you'll never read this anyway.

I'm like, Honest when I say you're...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/20/11, 02:43 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,315
Posted By 020jeffs
They are in England. And in America in fact....

They are in England.
And in America in fact. There's a line in friends where some one asks Rachel "Don't you want to know the sex of the baby"
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/18/11, 09:13 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,315
Posted By 020jeffs
I think you may think these lines have forced...

I think you may think these lines have forced rhymes because we have differing accents.
I'm from London don't forget. They rhyme easily and perfectly in my accent.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/17/11, 03:01 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,315
Posted By 020jeffs
Could you give an example of where you think I...

Could you give an example of where you think I have forced a line please mate.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/16/11, 02:22 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,315
Posted By 020jeffs
Grow Down

I'm mega mystical, invisible, eager to be egotistical.
A year ago I had a million targets, I missed 'em all.
When I was young my life was easy.
Food was always a freebie, spent all day watching...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/28/10, 07:58 PM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
I could spit these lyrics to the awkward and...

I could spit these lyrics to the awkward and untimely beat of your dad banging your mum.
You have a severe inability to read lyrics if you can't find the flow here.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/28/10, 06:26 PM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
That worm ridden line is mine, it must refer to...

That worm ridden line is mine, it must refer to you.
I didn't write those lyrics today, it's twenty past 2.
What the fuck do lanterns and pencils have to do with anything?
I feel bad to pull you up...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/28/10, 10:15 AM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
You're right about one thing, I don't deserve...

You're right about one thing, I don't deserve your lines.
Nobody should be forced to read your shit in their spare time.
And yes your raps are cereal, they come in a box.
Generic to read, I'd rather...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/26/10, 10:45 AM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
Right. All you dudes quit posting, this is a rap...

Right.
All you dudes quit posting, this is a rap battle between me and Matt Chylak and then we see who the judges say is the sickest.

Here's my first 16.

I admit it's hard to start a rap with no...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/25/10, 10:06 AM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
I changed my mind. I'd rather shoot for a chance...

I changed my mind.
I'd rather shoot for a chance to go second.
I prefer to rap responsively rather than just rapping about some one I don't know
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/25/10, 07:05 AM
Replies: 117
Views: 4,307
Posted By 020jeffs
Fucking brilliant. Each of the three judges needs...

Fucking brilliant.
Each of the three judges needs to vote for who they think should go first.
So that we can kick this shit off.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/22/10, 05:34 AM
Replies: 285
Views: 14,574
Posted By 020jeffs
Racism is a prejudice towards a race. I am not...

Racism is a prejudice towards a race.
I am not prejudiced towards any one.

End of fucking story, you cunt. Regardless of all that shit that just came out your gob.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/21/10, 06:52 AM
Replies: 285
Views: 14,574
Posted By 020jeffs
Right.. soo. I have a few questions First of...

Right.. soo. I have a few questions
First of all.. what the fuck are you talking about.. I think the entire forum wants to know. And no, I will not Google 'Signifying'.
Secondly.. From where have you...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/20/10, 11:20 AM
Replies: 285
Views: 14,574
Posted By 020jeffs
Not Gonna lie. I CANNOT be fucked to set up the...

Not Gonna lie.
I CANNOT be fucked to set up the thread,
If you can do it today Matt that would be sweet
If not I'll try do it on like sat or sun.
Once it's up we'll start the shit off on Mon.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/19/10, 07:37 PM
Replies: 285
Views: 14,574
Posted By 020jeffs
You don't have to go first if you don't wanna,...

You don't have to go first if you don't wanna, but we should definitely keep the:

"Me
You
Me
You
Me
You"

Format. No one should have to do 2 verses back to back.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 10/19/10, 02:42 PM
Replies: 109
Views: 5,807
Posted By 020jeffs
Where have I presumed myself a genius? Oh...

Where have I presumed myself a genius?

Oh what... nowhere?

Thought so


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