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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:47 PM - 01/15/12
Replies: 0
Views: 249
Posted By Maskedclown
Pain is Temporary
By: Lucas Bradley (aka me)

Yes i relize their are lots of grammar erros an stuff wrote it in lke a hour and yes i relize i is a bit corney but do please review and send me...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:10 PM - 01/15/12
Replies: 11
Views: 1,214
Posted By Maskedclown
another line that is good is:
The way you run is getting old
You have found the only way to rust gold
i like this and think this should be kept though the firs part could be changed just a bit.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:03 PM - 01/15/12
Replies: 2
Views: 319
Posted By Maskedclown
nice dont fall aprart or you will loe the fight
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:01 PM - 01/15/12
Replies: 2
Views: 367
Posted By Maskedclown
innocences is bliss
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:58 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 12
Views: 1,258
Posted By Maskedclown
poetr is about framig questios and sngs are generally about posting your personal answer to those questions
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:56 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 4
Views: 586
Posted By Maskedclown
i like it very flowy
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:54 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 4
Views: 558
Posted By Maskedclown
not bad
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:52 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 6
Views: 910
Posted By Maskedclown
intresting just a bit short i likes it though
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:50 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 4
Views: 426
Posted By Maskedclown
i likes it
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:48 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 1
Views: 327
Posted By Maskedclown
i like i like alot except for the word victorious maybe ifyou replaced it wth who "ll come out on top or maybe "because its hard to say who'll walk away"
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:42 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 5
Views: 892
Posted By Maskedclown
i didnt really like it but i can tell theres alot of passion in their and that you have talent
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:41 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 19
Views: 2,284
Posted By Maskedclown
i liked it but that is definitley a poem to me the way i read it at least
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:37 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 4
Views: 771
Posted By Maskedclown
yeha i lik h cous bu the beggining isnt really fitting
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:34 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 11
Views: 901
Posted By Maskedclown
Wouldnt having a dream be enough to break the chains?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:31 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 2
Views: 325
Posted By Maskedclown
you remnd me of my freind andwell me
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 11:30 AM - 01/15/12
Replies: 4
Views: 386
Posted By Maskedclown
its mushy but good


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