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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
10/18/11, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 528
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
10/15/11, 09:55 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 528
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
10/15/11, 10:46 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 528
Not like as in gays have started to rule this...
Not like as in gays have started to rule this country
But as in this country went from one of distinction and honor to one of corruption, homelessness, drugs, one where you HOPE you can wake up and...
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Forum: Self Promotion
10/06/11, 07:50 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 161
Vacant Throne (Denver-based Power Metal)
Vacant Throne is a U.S. Power Metal band located in Denver, Colorado. Unlike most run-of-the-mill metal bands today, Vacant Throne's progressive compositions narrate legendary tales from history by...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
10/06/11, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 528
Shitty political poem(Check it out) ;)
This is a very kind of random poems just to see what kind of reactions ill get for what ive said in this poem
Comments are more than welcome ;)
Oh dear god, why cant I say,
A prayer to you in my...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
10/06/11, 04:27 PM
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Replies: 279
Views: 18,330
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Forum: Self Promotion
08/09/11, 05:08 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 418
Sex, Drugs & Dubstep!
Hey guys, My name is Mike Smith. Im here to promote our new facebook page Sex, Drugs & Dubstep! This phrase was created by my friwend Mike Krilivsky, the owner of Red Blue Records and the Co-Owner of...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/18/11, 01:37 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 451
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/17/11, 12:31 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 451
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/14/11, 06:55 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 451
Not sure what to call this
Verse 1:
Every time I think of you
I see your smiling face
And it makes me think
That you're so far away
If only I could turn back time
Chorus:
Baby I would stay with you
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
08/16/10, 08:55 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 367
Give Me Wings(New pop rock song i wrote)
Give Me Wings
Verse 1:
I want you to take my hands and lead the way
And tell me all that you'd like to say
Please whisper you love me in my ear
Because thats all I'd ever want to hear
Chorus:
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/24/10, 05:19 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 287
The Rose(New poem i wrote, criticism welcome)
I walked through a field
It was covered in silver and gold
And then a few minutes in
I spotted a beautiful rose
It was crimson in color
Which is a dangerous red
But with its color it drew me
To its...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
06/15/10, 04:17 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 600
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
06/12/10, 08:01 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 600
Alone
Alone:
Purity, it once had a name,
And beauty, it once had a face;
Life used to have meaning,
When I once felt safe.
Once I had felt freedom,
And once I could always laugh;
And back not too long...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
06/05/10, 04:49 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 374
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
06/03/10, 06:51 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 374
The Soldiers Promise(New song i wrote)
Just a nice little song about soldiers who are getting deployed and will be gone for quite a while and may die overseas, but they always promise their loved ones they'll be home soon. So heres a song...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/27/10, 05:21 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 632
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/23/10, 01:03 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 632
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/21/10, 06:18 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 632
Another new poem i just wrote!
My second one in almost a year ive posted on here!
Help me out with some criticism please! any bit helps!
UNTITLED:
In the morning my spirit is gay,
It hides, while I seek, time to play,
And...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/21/10, 05:52 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 774
Old, Dark Trees(VERY short poem)
Constructive Criticism welcome please!....First poem i've written in quite a while
Its only like 4 lines but please give me some constructive criticism ok?
Old, Dark Trees:
I sat there staring at...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
02/21/10, 11:24 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 714
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
02/20/10, 09:01 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 714
New Rap I Wrote
Why is it that we all have to worry
Cause it seems like all it does
Is mess up our story
We only got one chance at life
So lets start it together, make it right
Get rid of all our fears
And start to...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
01/30/10, 03:56 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 660
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
01/30/10, 03:49 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 518
Thanka man. Glad you like it. I know its wordy,...
Thanka man. Glad you like it. I know its wordy, but sometimes i like to make them wordy because they come out better.
And you like the imagery huh? What did you think of when you read this since you...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
01/30/10, 02:52 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 660
Hmmmm personally it's a bit cliché. But...
Hmmmm personally it's a bit cliché. But honestly who am i to REALLY criticize anyones work? If you like it and make it into something good then thats all that matters :].
Honestly i can say...
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