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05:17 AM on 03/19/12 
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WhaleOfATime
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This is my first ever attempt at writing a song, I'm 16.
It's a slow song, a strum-a-long.

If you think you're gonna go,
And have a whale of a time,
Just stop and have a think,
Of what you're doing tonight,
Cause you'll be shagging on the floor,
And then running down the stairs,
And if you want it a secret,
Then you know it's not right.

Because everything great,
Should be shared with the nation,
And be logged in a book,
With every great publication.

Did your mother never care,
Or did she fail to mention,
As she put you to sleep,
With some drab comprehension,
That the world is your own,
So take what you want,
But don't come crying to me,
When you've lost in the hunt.

Because all that you hate,
Should be exressed in some fashion,
Like through terrible lyrics,
Or whatever's your passion.

Just ignore that voice,
In the back of your mind,
Trying to coax you into,
Something blind,
Cause if you think life is easy,
Then you're playing it wrong,
Just put up with them sleazy,
And sing a heartbreaking song.

To bring you back down to Earth,
Where your feet belong,
And save you from disappointment,
And your face getting long.
05:23 PM on 03/23/12 
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Bump. Opinions, please? Just want to know if my style/direction's fine...
09:34 AM on 03/26/12 
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Please? :(
04:30 PM on 08/05/12 
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Please. Anyone?



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