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02:37 PM on 05/07/12 
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nickmoebus
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We will grow old. It's inevitable, and the things we like now we might not in the future. Also the things we enjoyed as little kids have changed. We grow up and everything changes, and we can never go back.

Living on a timeline

This living on a timeline
Is not a fact I like
Though here I stand
Holding predictions in my hand
There will come a time when I am old
When I'll look back and hold
My head down low
Cuz all that's left for me has been foretold
Even now on this current stage
I haven't a clue
I skim further to a future page
What will I do?

(chorus)
Cuz when I stare into the dark, try and see
I know the silhouettes won't look like they used to
And if my veins detect a spark of energy
I know the time will not permit like it used
If I relive the acts of old memories
I know that I will not believe like I used to
Our time will not freeze like it used to
No the time will not freeze like it used
Like it used to

(verse 2)
This spacious mass of life
Seems to fade overnight
I reminisce, losing pieces of my life condensed
When I was back before my prime
I would look out and shine
In creations of what I'd make believe in my own mind
We say goodbye to the early age without a clue
And as time turns our hearts to grey
We'll miss our youth

(chorus)
Cuz when I stare into the dark, try and see
I know the silhouettes won't look like they used to
And if my veins detect a spark of energy
I know the time will not permit like it used
If I relive the acts of old memories
I know that I will not believe like I used to
Our time will not freeze like it used to
No the time will not freeze like it used
Like it used to

(bridge)
I can ask for a blank future
but my timeline is defined
On my path I request for vague blurs
But I'm treading simple lines

(chorus)
Cuz when I stare into the dark, try and see
I know the silhouettes won't look like they used to
And if my veins detect a spark of energy
I know the time will not permit like it used
If I relive the acts of old memories
I know that I will not believe like I used to
Our time will not freeze like it used to
No the time will not freeze like it used
Like it used to
09:06 AM on 05/09/12 
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I really like the second verse but it's all good...though it made me sad because I can relate- especially at the moment. Oh and I like the bridge as well...:)
11:26 AM on 05/09/12 
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I really like the second verse but it's all good...though it made me sad because I can relate- especially at the moment. Oh and I like the bridge as well...:)

Yeah it makes me sad too actually. it's one of my favorite songs I've written. I have written keyboard and sing to it past the chorus but after that I'm still writing. makes me wish I could go back sometimes.
08:46 AM on 05/10/12 
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Yeah it makes me sad too actually. it's one of my favorite songs I've written. I have written keyboard and sing to it past the chorus but after that I'm still writing. makes me wish I could go back sometimes.

Same to the going back... I so want to be 14 again sometimes- I think that was the best time- back before everyone started falling out and revising for exams and everything... Hope you get to finish the music as the lyrics deserve it.
11:00 AM on 05/10/12 
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Same to the going back... I so want to be 14 again sometimes- I think that was the best time- back before everyone started falling out and revising for exams and everything... Hope you get to finish the music as the lyrics deserve it.

yeah I really hope so too. Just sucks that things had to change so fast. my other song on here kinda has the same topic. It's called "play pretend" you should check it out.
02:06 PM on 06/19/12 
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Been feeling this one a lot lately
02:39 AM on 06/21/12 
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I can really relate to this.
04:58 AM on 06/21/12 
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I can really relate to this.

It's definitely one of the best ones I've written. I sing it daily. I'm glad you liked it :)



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