That's pretty bad ass man, I liked the minor changes. I think they worked in very well. The guitar is very catchy, when all the elements came together I was a little scared cause that's a little far from my taste. but after a couple lines I was diggin it for sure. very good, keep it up man
Thanks a lot. I apologize for taking so long to reply. 12hr shifts at the hospital just drains me. I hope to record a proper recording in the future with a full-band. This was me recording one take and layering it with a few vocals. I'm happy you took the time to listen and enjoyed as a result. I appreciate it :) I love writing. I just wish I had more free time to do so.
I thought that was very deep and inspiring even and in a very Jack Kerouac way I dug that man haha. At first when you mentioned the word "ultra-violent" my immediate thought was of A Clockwork Orange haha but it was a really nice piece to read and if i didn't have crapscrap internet I would definitely listen to the recording.
You know, I've always wanted to read On the Road, but never find myself the time to do so. Well, I never find more time from work. Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. Clockwork Orange is one of my favorite books/movies, so its definitely an inspiration. I love making allusions. Once again, thanks again for the kind response. Hopefully, by the time you are able to listen, I'll have a decent recording available.
Thanks again everyone!