[marymnewland]

Big thanks :)

[One World]

It is a somewhat darker topic, although the lyrics don't initially pull you straight down that road, the open ending is an interesting one, I definitely enjoyed that little detail. The interesting thing about this for me, is that the focus of the song, the protagonist if you will, is struggling with something although we don't really find out what. At a guess I would say that the character lacks self belief or esteem in some regard, not feeling worthy of the 'sunshine and good life' that are depicted in this song.

Thank you for sharing.
Chris

[Voguerista]

Great depth. I love it!

[ShayneCollis]

Wow it amazed me. I know how deep one can get being a lyric writer myself.

[Konogorov]

That's pretty amazing, great job, would love to hear more.

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[Secondbloom]

The darkest songs some how bring out the most creative juices

[KingJohn_654]

I'm not very good at giving feedback, but i liked it. I definitely feel the SDR vibe.

[a speedo model]

This thread is spammed to shit.

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Originally Posted by KingJohn_654

I'm not very good at giving feedback, but i liked it. I definitely feel the SDR vibe.

You did? Awesome. That was perfect feedback. Thanks!

[cut!print]

Originally Posted by a speedo model

This thread is spammed to shit.

No duh. Nothing I can do about it...

[a speedo model]

Originally Posted by cut!print

No duh. Nothing I can do about it...

Just an observation, I've never seen so many in one thread.

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Originally Posted by a speedo model

Just an observation, I've never seen so many in one thread.

I definitely thought it was strange too. Now more are coming!

[shawnXtreme01]

worth the read very imagery filled. really nice job