[JackyKerouacy<3]

I just listened to your song and it was gorgeous. I adored it. Please keep creating!

[thesafeword]

Kids Pt. 2

woah

[thecurerocks182]

Originally Posted by JackyKerouacy<3

I just listened to your song and it was gorgeous. I adored it. Please keep creating!

Thanks again! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I got many songs in the works. It just a matter of finding time from my job at the hospital to commit them to decent recordings. Once again, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I very much appreciate :)

Originally Posted by thesafeword

Kids Pt. 2

woah

As long as you sing it...

[amy1104]

This is great!

[UniqueLumi]

Love it ~

[thecurerocks182]

Originally Posted by amy1104

This is great!

Originally Posted by UniqueLumi

Love it ~

Thanks a lot for the positive feedback. Hope you got to listen to the song. Once again, I really appreciate it.

[ShawnHowells]

Nicely Writen!

[CrypticHistory]

The lines about the kids in their garage, and in their basements, really reminded me of a few lines from Thursday's "War All the Time."

"So we park these cars, parents' garage, to listen to the lullaby of carbon monoxide."

and

"All those nights in the basement, the kids are still screaming."

Not to take anything away from your writing though, I think it's phenomenal.

[Tha one Carter]

That first one is sweet. so deep

[jake1000]

One of the best I've seen on here, not sure I entirely understood it but I think that's part of the reason I like it so umch!

[thecurerocks182]

Originally Posted by ShawnHowells

Nicely Writen!

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you appreciate it.

Originally Posted by CrypticHistory

The lines about the kids in their garage, and in their basements, really reminded me of a few lines from Thursday's "War All the Time."

"So we park these cars, parents' garage, to listen to the lullaby of carbon monoxide."

and

"All those nights in the basement, the kids are still screaming."

Not to take anything away from your writing though, I think it's phenomenal.

Originally Posted by Tha one Carter

That first one is sweet. so deep

War all the time definitely has some similar themes running. I find myself consistently intrigued by the plight of an adolescent that is growing into maturity in destructive environments. Not to say they influence the line, but I do love Thursday. Having said that, did you listen to the song? I may or may not re-record the song, as I have substantially upgraded my recording gear. Once again, thanks.

Originally Posted by jake1000

One of the best I've seen on here, not sure I entirely understood it but I think that's part of the reason I like it so umch!

Thanks a lot! It means a lot to me. I don't like to divulge meaning of my songs, as I like readers to draw their own conclusions, but Larry Clark's Kids would be where I took a lot of inspiration from. It's a very challenging movie, but I think it's brilliant. Thanks again.

PS- check out the song if you have chance.

[Bocheech]

chorus is perfect

[topekoms]

Excellent

[thecurerocks182]

Originally Posted by Bocheech

chorus is perfect

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Originally Posted by topekoms

Excellent

Thanks for reading and commenting. Did you happen to listen to the song? I'm considering re-recording it because I've upgraded a lot of recording gear. Thanks again.