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Saetia - A Retrospective

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Saetia - A Retrospective
Record Label: Level Plane
Release Date: October 1, 2001
This review is a user submitted review from Dymytry Vance. You can see all of Dymytry Vance's submitted reviews here.
 
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07:16 PM on 08/12/09
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07:31 PM on 08/12/09
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Dymytry Vance
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Thank U m3h fri3nd... lol... but did you like the review? I really like your revies, so I'd like your honest opinion. (I know it's sort of rusty but it's my first review, and first reviews are never the best...)
07:49 PM on 08/12/09
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Thank U m3h fri3nd... lol... but did you like the review? I really like your revies, so I'd like your honest opinion. (I know it's sort of rusty but it's my first review, and first reviews are never the best...)
Yeah. Idk how you wrote it, but some lines seem a little wordy.. this one in particular

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The drummer shines on many of the tracks and perfectly follows the spastic eccentricities that mesh flawlessly together and intertwine to create a pretty original sound.

Not knocking your writing, but if you're using a thesaurus to come up with this or being purposely wordy then it's not particularly good. However, I still like the wording and it's informative. I just don't like the band so my critique isn't perfectly accurate.

EDIT: and is miles better than many user reviews here. Including a lot of mine when I started.
07:54 PM on 08/12/09
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Yeah. Idk how you wrote it, but some lines seem a little wordy.. this one in particular



Not knocking your writing, but if you're using a thesaurus to come up with this or being purposely wordy then it's not particularly good. However, I still like the wording and it's informative. I just don't like the band so my critique isn't perfectly accurate.

EDIT: and is miles better than many user reviews here. Including a lot of mine when I started.
Yeah, I see what you mean... but I am a naturally verbose person. No, I refuse to use a thesaurus unless if I am brain-dead that day and am saying good every other word. I'm not writing for Pitchfork yet.

That's okay about the band thing. I really like the genre so of course I liked this band.

And thanks for the last line.
08:00 PM on 08/12/09
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Yeah, I see what you mean... but I am a naturally verbose person. No, I refuse to use a thesaurus unless if I am brain-dead that day and am saying good every other word. I'm not writing for Pitchfork yet.

That's okay about the band thing. I really like the genre so of course I liked this band.

And thanks for the last line.
haha alright I was just asking. If you're verbose, use your verbose words.
08:07 PM on 08/12/09
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haha alright I was just asking. If you're verbose, use your verbose words.
My sentences are always a little verbose. My friend made fun of me for saying that his attempts at being jocular fell flat and made him look like an ignoramus.
12:28 PM on 10/04/09
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I like your use of descriptive, verbose words. Your review's' are good, I was actually intrested in this one.
12:50 PM on 10/04/09
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I like your use of descriptive, verbose words. Your review's' are good, I was actually intrested in this one.
Thank you for the compliment.

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