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04:30 PM on 09/13/12 
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KrisValentine
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I'm just one of the million pieces of the sky
That flys over us until it falls down
Over the people i love and care about
And blows out the last light
What is it that God has created
A boy in fear and pain
Just a ohter life wasted
That no one are going to save
'Cause he is just a boy who have seen his last day


I can feel the cold skies under my feets
And the nightmares and dreams that are surounding me
Just to tell me that my heart still beats
I know that i got alot of time left
But i just don't wanna feel anything anymore
So take my pain away or just let me rest
For my own best


There is something that walks around In the inside of my heart
It hurts me deep down i just want it to get it out get it out
Because that is what my life is all about
Is it all the lies that fills my body up
Is it all the failours that makes my heart stop
What if it's the reason that i am gone tomorrow
Would someone then stop their life for a minute and let me know they are sorry
Or would they just keep on living until the stars falls over all of us


I can feel the cold skies under my feets
And the nightmares and dreams that are surounding me
Just to tell me that my heart still beats
I know that i got alot of time left
But i just don't wanna feel anything anymore
So take my pain away or just let me rest
For my own best


(Look at me now before my stars falls down
Tell me everything now before my time runs out
Explane to me now how this got so far
Explane it now before my stars falls down)


Don't say a word now
Just be quite and let the angles voice carry me home
To the only place where i can be myself
To the only place i ever known
Don't worry we will see eacohter again
When the sun gose down and your time runs out

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We're not going into details what this song is about d:
But it's just about the dreams we all have that falls and crash down
Because of people in our life that breaks everything for us
and about pain and depress.. Something we all have felt
It's pretty shourt but i am sick so i don't feel like working anymore
On this *Puke* *Puke*
The name was just fast made up got any ideas for a title
Then feel free to come with them(:
06:16 AM on 09/20/12 
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A little depressing, but otherwise very well written! :)
07:10 AM on 09/20/12 
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KrisValentine
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A little depressing, but otherwise very well written! :)
Thank you(: Just a little depressing? This is like the most depressing song i ever writing d: But i was going for depressing so that's good.. i guess d:
05:05 PM on 09/20/12 
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Good
11:32 PM on 09/20/12 
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KrisValentine
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Thank you
03:58 AM on 09/27/12 
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SilverJayStorm
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I think the name matches the song pretty well. I think the song is great, showing everything young people go through. Dissapointment, dispair, ect. It shows how people don't know and mostly don't care as they step on others on their way by. Great song, great form, great thing overall. Nice job! =)
08:48 AM on 10/05/12 
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KrisValentine
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I think the name matches the song pretty well. I think the song is great, showing everything young people go through. Dissapointment, dispair, ect. It shows how people don't know and mostly don't care as they step on others on their way by. Great song, great form, great thing overall. Nice job! =)
Haha thank you(: Lyrics have never really been my strong side so it means alot people likes them anyway(; I named it "Falling Stars" right after i was done writing it but i think it sounds stupid d: After that i named it "A Million Pieces" but for some reason it won't change the name on here.. Dosen't really matter tho 'cause i am not really happy with that title ehiter d:
05:34 PM on 10/05/12 
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Haha thank you(: Lyrics have never really been my strong side so it means alot people likes them anyway(; I named it "Falling Stars" right after i was done writing it but i think it sounds stupid d: After that i named it "A Million Pieces" but for some reason it won't change the name on here.. Dosen't really matter tho 'cause i am not really happy with that title ehiter d:

Both of those titles sound great to me, but that's my opinion. =D
03:24 PM on 10/06/12 
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Both of those titles sound great to me, but that's my opinion. =D
haha thank you i find it really hard to make a title so i'm glad at least someone likes them xD
03:36 PM on 10/06/12 
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haha thank you i find it really hard to make a title so i'm glad at least someone likes them xD

Making titles is really hard =D
02:40 AM on 10/07/12 
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nyc
02:43 AM on 10/07/12 
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ver good
10:15 PM on 10/07/12 
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