[herpderpharvey]

Leaves that once were dancing now lie dormant in the cold
You stay forever young there while I grow forever old
I gave it to you when at first our eyes had met
A spark of something in the air at that moment
Weak, though you were, you’d held it oh so tight
You never gave it up, you never left my side
No longer moving with the sands of time
You’ve kept it in your hands and hold it, even still

Seasons pass, winter comes colder than before
My heart grows cold, frozen, and weak
Forever without the one it had fought so hard to seek
What could have been long lasting now cut down to memory
Eternal homesick, I wish you could come back
But one can’t unwind the hands of time, the cruel, cruel hands of fate
Just left here with the memory, in stone eternally
Knowing it’s impossible for you to come back to me

[Xei]

uze a little more common rhymes n pauses... overall nice

[herpderpharvey]

Originally Posted by Xei

uze a little more common rhymes n pauses... overall nice

Use more rhymes? That would ruin it. Too many = a bad thing.

Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[topekoms]

Nice Job I like It

[herpderpharvey]

Originally Posted by topekoms

Nice Job I like It

Thanks

[herpderpharvey]

Here are some bullshit romantic lyrics. I'd avoid writing them, but at the moment I can't really help it. I mean, I can, but I'd rather write when I'm inspired, which I was. It's about memories. Memories are what make this life beautiful. Without them, there would be nothing. No meaning. It's about the fact that, even if a relationship ends, even bitterly, you still have the memories. The good, the bad. There's not a whole lot you can do about it, so hold onto the good memories. You have them for a reason. They're a truly wonderful thing.

The way you shine under the moonlight
The way your eyes stare deep inside of mine
The way you make the days melt like they're snow
Prove that it's a beautiful life
If we're only together for a moment
Before the candlelight goes out
At least the flicker lasted
Long enough to see the reflection in our eyes
It could all be over by tomorrow
All the feelings from you and I
Would remain within this life
No bitterness for passing time
Memories, sweet memories, long lasting, always shine
Memories are the beauty of life

[Xei]

Originally Posted by herpderpharvey

Use more rhymes? That would ruin it. Too many = a bad thing.

Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

nah.... i mean a little more rhymic

[herpderpharvey]

Originally Posted by Xei

nah.... i mean a little more rhymic

I disagree. It works perfectly as it is (music-wise) The lyrics fit the song just fine.