I'm pretty sure that DarkBlue, almost certainly a Lit major, is the only one who really noticed the issues with the grammar. The grammatical errors aren't that noticeable, unless your name is 'Spelling and Grammar Check'. With that said, I can't get on board with The Fray. I don't know, there's something about it that has always put me off of their sound. I did like the review tho.
That's a very masculine avatar you got there, Jason.